On Friday Chloe finished her first rough cut of 'The Babysitter'. The edit is looking decent but needs a lot of improvement. The whole opening of the piece could do with being dragged out a little to build tension and so it doesn't feel as rushed.
There are also moments where we could do with some close ups to tighten the edit up. With some close-ups of phones ringing and Rebecca calling contacts within her phone. The ending when Jack is revealed to be outside also doesn't seem to have the same impact I wanted, so may have to film some new shots.
Overall I think the edit, needs some work on the pacing though out, to help the piece flow a bit better.
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